Right? The written word is its own kind of instrument and I dig it
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It gives rhythm and flavor to your writing. Varied punctuation - where appropriate - is an easy way to spice anything up, give it a little more flavor, more control over how your words are read. There is a quote by Gary Provost that isn’t specifically about punctuation but illustrates this point well, it’s one of my favorites:
This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word sentences are fine. But several together become monotonous. Listen to what is happening. The writing is getting boring. The sound of it drones. It’s like a stuck record. The ear demands some variety. Now listen. I vary the sentence length, and I create music. Music. The writing sings. It has a pleasant rhythm, a lilt, a harmony. I use short sentences. And I use sentences of medium length. And sometimes, when I am certain the reader is rested, I will engage him with a sentence of considerable length, a sentence that burns with energy and builds with all the impetus of a crescendo, the roll of the drums, the crash of the cymbals–sounds that say listen to this, it is important
Yes, it’s nuanced but it breaks up the sentence flow in a different way. Also used for listing things. A comma is more a small pause, like this. A semicolon is used to differentiate two independent related thoughts ; it’s kind of a combination between a period and a comma. A dash can be used for many things - a longer separating of thoughts, listing different points such as this, or just as an intentional emphasis to add a more protracted pause.
I know, and thank God they got rid of those things
Fake banana tastes disgusting but kiwi is delicious
I upvoted you for solidarity but strawberry is my favorite flavor so also how dare you
Flickerby@lemmy.zipto Asklemmy@lemmy.ml•Do gamers actually like the look of gaming computers and accessories?12·1 month agoI have a keyboard that lights up because I like to type in the dark and my dexterity isn’t what it used to be but that’s about it. I would’ve preferred a solid color but RGB was all I found. Not a bad for $20, it’s a solid steel frame
Oh, right. No the “gamer ascetic” is garish as fuck. I just want something that works.
Had this issue recently.
“Vanilla is good.”
“What? No, chocolate is good.”
“Both can be good. There doesn’t have to be a competition.”
“NO! Either chocolate is good or you hate chocolate!”
Flickerby@lemmy.zipto Chat@beehaw.org•Beehaw has a huge surplus of money. Could we use it to fund another service?English4·1 month agoI have a good thought once in a blue moon lol
Flickerby@lemmy.zipto Chat@beehaw.org•Beehaw has a huge surplus of money. Could we use it to fund another service?English14·1 month agoI’m aware. It’s a general “I don’t want to see this instance disappear from the fediverse due to (un?)foreseen circumstances”. Of which funding could be one.
Blanket is super comfy so if it’s cool enough, yes. If I’m going to be swimming in ball sweat soup an hour after falling asleep it’s sans blanket time
Flickerby@lemmy.zipto Chat@beehaw.org•Beehaw has a huge surplus of money. Could we use it to fund another service?English19·1 month agoComing from a lemme.ee refugee - bank that money for when you need it. You never know what might happen.
Flickerby@lemmy.zipto No Stupid Questions@lemmy.world•How do you all keep the area around the toilet paper dust-free?13·1 month agoRiskiest click of the last month
Flickerby@lemmy.zipto Games@sh.itjust.works•Video games spending by young Americans is dropping sharply, report suggestsEnglish7·1 month agoI know I’d rather wait a month than spend $40+ extra for the privilege of being an unpaid beta tester
Flickerby@lemmy.zipto Games@sh.itjust.works•Video games spending by young Americans is dropping sharply, report suggestsEnglish30·1 month agoWhen new games are approaching $100 and you know you can wait a month or two for it to drop $40 it’s an easy decision
Flickerby@lemmy.zipto Asklemmy@lemmy.ml•What should be done with the unemployable people?561·1 month agoPeople have a right to exist and society has a responsibility to care for those who cannot work. The whole point of society is to ensure the health and well being of their members as a WHOLE. If a society cannot or will not care for their elderly or infirm then that is a failed society.
Flickerby@lemmy.zipOPto New Communities@lemmy.world•Reprieve, a com for men to take a break from the worldEnglish3·1 month agoI don’t blame you. All that’s available nowadays for men to reach out is absolutely inundated with horrible horrible people and ideas. This is meant to be a space where those people aren’t allowed to fuck it up for the normal people who just need someone to talk to.
Flickerby@lemmy.zipto Technology@lemmy.world•Men are opening up about mental health to AI instead of humansEnglish5·1 month agoAh well, unfortunately the community name is set, there’s no changing it after it’s created. Maybe I should’ve made it more searchable but hopefully we can spread it by word of mouth enough where it’ll take off. Also I kinda wanted it less intimidating clinical sterile sounding and more just a homey place where people can feel safe to talk openly, just a li’l reprieve from the outside world.
Flickerby@lemmy.zipto Fediverse@lemmy.world•what are the lemmy "format" alternatives besides its standard ui?English5·1 month agoConnect is wonderful! Posting from that. I don’t know if they have an iOS version but I’m on Android. Very much like RiF, feels familiar
It’s about respect for the other person, as I see it. You wouldn’t be a little miffed if your wife of 10 years sent you a “k thx bai (link to divorce papers)” instead of talking in person?